funkycaveman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bitey plays around]

hia

hey man how you doing? you gonna enter this to the collab, i will post mine up soon buts its not finished. nice one tho' not that much action tho' are you going to add to it? looking forwaard to the actual thing, c ya later

OctoFlash responds:

k bro! yeah thats what i thought too.. not enough action but however.. lets see what future brings =)

[Mario's Block Trouble]

Cool

Hay man i found this through the forums, and it looks good, i will give you 10 and 5 cos you apriciated the help at the forums, i dont think i helped you but i can now, for the text you can have it in a constant text box or speech bubbles not boring fonts what are have to read and inconsistant in size, more enemy types newxt time, but a good use of mario well done and good luck!

Flash-Gamers responds:

Thanks, I use the forums alot! Yeah I really need text boxes!

[Cardboard City]

Hmmm

it was ok, but there were flaws that could have been fixed,

buggy menu(bad button detction)
slow at times
annoying loadergame
dodgy frame rate
mixed fonts
pixelated images
no voice(no personality)

Goods:
nice theme
great animation
lack story

i would like to see a better one next time, ok collab sorry but i will still give a high score becasue collabs are more work than normal submissions

MorrowDays responds:

well it isn't our fault it was slow at times if you're meaning lag, and the framerate was 24, but whatever.

[Circuit Skirmish 2]

ok...

a bit boring at first but the character does not seem that developed, its hard to relate to him as being cool and the reasons for why he kills if he has no creator, the advert at the start did not work so i couldnt help you out and click it, visually impressive but needed more wow moments, maybe slowmotion shooting or flying around, good luck...

i thoought the song was from the orange box, im makeing a game on the orange box

Falconer02 responds:

Hey thanks for the review! As far as the slowmotion thing goes, I think it would be too redundant as hollywood has basically raped that dead horse too many times. As far as flying around goes, the next part will primarily be a dogfight, so there'll be plenty of that. When I keep working on it of course!

So you're using the Source SDK though? Episode 2 engine? Let me know when you got something out as I'm a huge HL-mod fan!