funkycaveman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fulpitude]

So this is what goes on in the Ng office?

I liked how the story was portrayed and given a movie jam theme. You worked well with the script you were given. Good work!

[Madness: Judgement Day!]

FunkDrunk :P

Nice simple and well timed humour that had a slight madness twist to it. I can see it was made quickly so a little rough around the edges but its a great submission!

[Capture The Flag: Ep 3]

All round enjoyed

Overall i enjoyed watching the animattion, the art and animation quality was top quality and also were the characters, they had depth and a personality. The only think i could say would be a slight downer is the story and voice acting, i love the tape at the end with reference to the 'saw' motion pictures . But with newcomers to the series, people may be put off with what they see. The next one should be a great improvment.

[10 Signs.. The Collab!]

NICE

it reminded me how some points were similair to mine, oh no, is it that bad.

nice presentation and enjoyable to watch, thanks

[Bycicle race]

Short

Quite short and lacks a bit of high quality animation, some 3d was there but not enough and lack of detail means its not as fun to watch, nice idea tho'

[StoryBoard 1]

wow

if you keep up this quality of work this will be a really amazing animation, with a bit of colour fantasic, will there be another one, like more? i would love to help

[Bitey plays around]

hia

hey man how you doing? you gonna enter this to the collab, i will post mine up soon buts its not finished. nice one tho' not that much action tho' are you going to add to it? looking forwaard to the actual thing, c ya later

OctoFlash responds:

k bro! yeah thats what i thought too.. not enough action but however.. lets see what future brings =)

[Mario's Block Trouble]

Cool

Hay man i found this through the forums, and it looks good, i will give you 10 and 5 cos you apriciated the help at the forums, i dont think i helped you but i can now, for the text you can have it in a constant text box or speech bubbles not boring fonts what are have to read and inconsistant in size, more enemy types newxt time, but a good use of mario well done and good luck!

Flash-Gamers responds:

Thanks, I use the forums alot! Yeah I really need text boxes!

[_Clock vs Madness War_]

Review

i like the song animation is a bit dogy but bits were cool!

[Cardboard City]

Hmmm

it was ok, but there were flaws that could have been fixed,

buggy menu(bad button detction)
slow at times
annoying loadergame
dodgy frame rate
mixed fonts
pixelated images
no voice(no personality)

Goods:
nice theme
great animation
lack story

i would like to see a better one next time, ok collab sorry but i will still give a high score becasue collabs are more work than normal submissions

MorrowDays responds:

well it isn't our fault it was slow at times if you're meaning lag, and the framerate was 24, but whatever.